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Finally! After months after the idea was mooted (after some amusing discussion with [personal profile] raaj) here is a short fic about Cid just after Yuffie has returned everything she stole. And I'm not sure on this - I kind of feel it should go on a bit further, but at the same time, it felt a naturally stopping point. Warnings for language for a change, as this *is* Cid afterall.


Cid Highwind scowled as he watched the other two dart ahead; the blonde ex-SOLDIER and the Wutai ninja. Why was he here again? Simple question. Not so simple answer. For one thing someone had to keep an eye on the two seemingly least stable members of this group. Cloud with his occasional headaches and tendency to stare into space, and Yuffie with her sticky fingers and her "what's yours is mine" attitude. It also didn't help that as a peace-offering the ninja, in addition to giving them all their materia back, had gotten into an involved discussion with their leader about effective materia combinations and the appeal of truly huge explosions. That and carving great chunks out of the scenery with summon spells. While the region south of Wutai was quite barren and bereft of anything important (a big reason why they were there in the first place), Cid was of the impression that the city to the north would be less then thrilled if they left the land in rather more pieces then they found it.

At least he wasn't just here to babysit, though a shudder racked him as he saw Yuffie hold up a red materia some distance ahead, afraid she was going to abruptly unleash the creature. Fortunately she was explaining something to Cloud, sliding the sphere into a pouch and withdrawing two green orbs in place. This was all kind of his fault; he'd rarely used magic before, not interested in calling forth the knowledge of the Ancients, sorry, the Cetra as Aeris had insisted on correcting him. He was interesting in mechanics, vehicles and space. Yet here he was, with a band of misfits tracking down the previously missing Sephiroth. Obstensibly his goal was to convince Rufus to restart the space program, but he was with this lot now, and the group made heavy use of materia so he needed to get up to speed with it.

His fingers clutched at the spear in his hand. It had been a long time since he had last fought with such a weapon, and the group had insisted he re-familiarise himself with combat. From what the pilot could tell, the group had basically been in regular scrapes ever since they started out in Midgar, and no one expected them to take out Sephiroth without a lot of prior combat experience. Unlike the others, Cid had found himself in Wutai without a weapon, trying desperately not to dwell on exactly where his spear had wound up...


It had been a bad day. He'd aborted the rocket launch, screamed abuse at Shera for a good few hours and was now sulking in the cockpit of the Tiny Bronco; the least accessible place he could think of at the moment. He tried to lull himself with a moment of silence after ordering his terrified assistant to start making things up to him by doing his laundry. A nervous tap on the windshield destroyed his reverie.
He slammed the hatch open, levelling a glare at the woman. "What?"

"Um... captain? I finished the washing, but the washing line when you- before," she hastily amended her sentence. "I just wanted you to know I'm going to get a replacement pole so I can hang it up."

"For fuck's sake Shera, improvise!" He cast about looking for something that could replace the bent damaged pole he'd uprooted hours before and proceeded to attack the house with. A brainwave hit him and he fished inside a compartment pulling out his dragoon lance. "Here, use this."

"Y-your spear?" qualied Shera. "C-captain, you shouldn't use something like that."

"Says who?" Cid hauled himself out of the plane and stalked across the lawn, before plunging the spear point first deep into the ground. "See? Perfectly good replacement." He reattached the severed washing line and stoof back a moment to appraise his handiwork. "Works fine. Now do the fucking washing and leave me the fuck alone."

Shera flinched back as Cid stalked past her, and let out a sigh of relief as Cid settled back into the plane, eyes fixed on the lopsided Shinra-26 ahead of him.


No, it wouldn't do to let his new companions know that in a fit of anger he had recycled the antique weapon like that. He'd been initially evasive when they asked him if he could fight, and when he confirmed that, with what he fought. At least after things had calmed after chasing Yuffie around the city, and the Turks had finally swanned off to fail to look for them. He'd been harbouring an idea that he should be able to pick up any weapon given a chance, so asked to look over their spares. That had been another embarassing spectacle. Cloud's swords he could barely stand upright, Barret's guns required a rather different arm then he had. While he could hold his own in a bar-room brawl and had several times, he could not bring himself to consider charging at monsters fist first as Tifa did. Red, no, Nanaki had claws and nothing to offer. That mechanised Moogle had megaphones which unless Cid wanted to shout his opponents to death (which admittedly did hold quite an appeal) weren't going to cut it. Yuffie offered him a shuriken which he came very close losing a foot to, and as much as he'd wanted to make use one of Vincent's array of pistols, his brief loan and inability to hit anything accurately more then a metre in front of him ended any thoughts of long-range fighting.

Tifa eventually decided to speed things up and ask exactly what Cid had used previously, and at the mention of spears, Aeris piped up and offered him a stave. This was more like it he'd thought, hefting the pole in one hand and getting a feel for it. He pivotted and launched it, watching disheartened as it landed with a muted clang on the ground, turning up a section of grass. Aeris ran to retrieve it, while Cloud sorted through their pooled money and dispatched Yuffie to find somewhere that sold spears.

And this was why he currently clutched a new spear in one hand. Now he had to remember how to fight. It had been a long time. He glanced over at the excitable youths who were busily piling materia up on the ground, Yuffie animatedly gesturing to Cloud and pointing at various landmarks. Well, they weren't injuring anyone. At least not yet. It still rankled that he was stuck out here with both of them, when he could have practiced both spear and materia on his own without two vastly more experienced companions to critique him. But everyone else had something better to do. Vincent had vanished off, Tifa and Aeris were eager to try out the local hot-springs, Barret was shopping for his kid, Cait Sith had bewilderingly basically switched off, Nanaki had gone off to sleep... So that left him, the new guy with the kids.

With a sigh, Cid turned his back on the other two intending to run through what he remembered of spear fighting. With a quick glance to check that the duo were not messing with the summon materia right this second, he closed his eyes for a moment, calmed his breathing and slid into a fighting stance. An imaginary enemy flicked into being. Palmer. No, that didn't feel right somehow. President Shinra? No, he was already dead. Rufus. Now that held more of an appeal. He jabbed the spear forward intending to skewer his target, but imaginary Rufus turned with the spear jab and it missed. No matter, techniques, stances and styles were coming back to him and he swung the spear to follow.

It wasn't the best training, but it was workable. Certainly getting used to fighting like this was preferable to being face to face with some nasty in the wild and then discovering he was so rusty, had forgotten so much that he'd be felled before he started. He'd just finished an interesting carwheeling flip, which swept imaginary Rufus' feet out from under him so he could bring his own feet down onto his enemy's torso and then plunge the spear point first into his head, when the first explosion blew him over.

"What the fuck?" he yelled, pushing himself up on his hands. Now he thought about it the two of them had escaped his notice while he'd been running through his practice.

"Sorry Cid!" Yuffie ran up and looked down on him. Cid's eyes widened as he looked beyond her. He hadn't heard anything, but the pair of them had been busy. The field was charred, small fires still burning in places, ice-crystals stabbing up out of the ground, and in a few places the ground was waterlogged.

"What was that?"

"Cloud wanted to know what happened if we used flare on ice crystals. Guess we know now."

"Fan fucking tastic. Did you have to it right next to me?"

"Hey, that was a total accident. If you want to blame anyone, blame Shiva."

Cid stared at her. "What... are you talking about?"

Yuffie sighed. "Gawd, old man, you really have missed out on materia."

Cid growled. "Shut it brat. I ain't that old."

"But you're so stuck in the old days. You haven't even touched any of the materia."

"Don't care. Who is Shiva, and why is it her fault I got blown up?"

Yuffie looked evasive for a moment before responding. "Shiva's a summon. You do know what summon spells are right?"

Cid just held her gaze levelly.

"I'll take that as a yes then," chirped Yuffie. "Well, normally we've been only summoning one summon at a time. But I got to thinking, surely it would be better against something really tough to have more then one fight at the same time. Then we can double-team things. Or better triple-team."

"Brat, I have a depressing sense that what you are about to say may very well explain why only one of those things is used at a time."

Yuffie fidgeted a little. "...you might be right."

"What happened then?"

"Well, Cloud got the idea that if you hit a new ice-crystal at the right time with a hot fire it should blow up right? Like what just happened to you."

"So it's Cloud's fault."

"Kinda. Sorta. He did cast the flare. But he thought the ice crystal was going to hit you."

"And that's supposed to make me feel better after nearly being blown up? So who's responsible for the ice?"

"Shiva."

"Who is a summon. So who summoned her?"

"I did."

"Ah, now we're getting somewhere. So it's your fault?"

"I think it's more of Cloud's."

"What? For the flare?"

"No, for Ifrit."

"...another summon?"

"Yeah."

"...wait. You summoned Shiva, and then tried to combined her attack with Ifrit's?"

"Pretty much."

"And you missed?"

"Kind of. It would have worked perfectly. Had Ifrit not kicked the ice out of the way instead of blasting it."

Yuffie fell silent as Cid mulled over the information. He'd always thought of summons as dumb directable attacks, or at least that was the impression he'd gained from the party and the odd time he'd seen the creatures called into existence. Apparently there was more to them then he'd realised.

"So... we gonna conclude it might be best to only have one of them around at a time, or just not fire them at each other?"

"Dunno yet," replied Yuffie. "Wanna help us find out?"

"In the interests of science?"

"Yeah. That or the art of blowing shit up. Come on old man, you need the practice anyway."

"One more old man out of you and you are going to get the strongest summon we have coming down on you. Actually, which is that?"

"Oh, that's Choco-Mog. Yeah, most devastating thing we have."

"Sounds like a fucking kid's cartoon."

Date: 2013-05-07 16:59 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
CID AND THE TWO LEAST STABLE MEMBERS OF THE GROUP ahhh. Kind of finding it hilarious that Cid already has Cloud pegged as this (but he's still the leader). I also liked the confusion over Red/Nanaki's name--gives the impression that the group as a whole is still confused about which to address Red as, so he's been hearing both used. And then in the elimination of his companions' weapons, Cait Sith's made me crack up--I kind of want to use that idea at some point of Cid grabbing a spare megaphone to shout abuse at someone, never mind not actually doing damage, he just needs to give them a piece of his mind.

Also just love the mental image that the whole group is watching this as he launches Aerith's staff into the air, and all of them thinking various thoughts of disappointment.

"But everyone else had something better to do." OR SO THEY SAY laughing at Cait Sith's being "switch off" and Nanaki's being naptime. I'm surprised Cid's not grumping more about them.

"Rufus. Now that held more of an appeal." I'm sure it does just after him trying to take the Tiny Bronco, hahaha.

"Brat, I have a depressing sense that what you are about to say may very well explain why only one of those things is used at a time."

I really, really like this line. Just the phrasing and the rather flat tone I imagine it being said in.

"Well, Cloud got the idea that if you hit a new ice-crystal at the right time with a hot fire it should blow up right? Like what just happened to you."

"So it's Cloud's fault."

"Kinda. Sorta. He did cast the flare. But he thought the ice crystal was going to hit you."


Pretty sure this is to blame on just how roundabout Yuffie insists on explaining things, but the first time I was reading this I honestly thought Cloud had somewhat cruel and unusual ideas for checking if his teammates were ready for dealing with ambushes and other sorts of surprises--that he thought the ice crystal was going to hit Cid because it was intended to (making casting Flare on it too rather overkill). Then got down to the part about Ifrit having kicked the crystal and sent it off course. Well. I'm sure Cid's much happier with a leader who's not that crazy. XD;

"Oh, that's Choco-Mog. Yeah, most devastating thing we have."

"Sounds like a fucking kid's cartoon."


I do love Yuffie weaseling by trying to mislead Cid, and Cid's f-bomb and the fact that he's not so easily fooled because really, the name itself doesn't suggest some dread creature. It does feel like a suitable place to end, but at the same time isn't closed off from continuation either.

I think the biggest concerns I have would be that obviously it gets very very dialogue-heavy at the end and the round-about explanation is partly to blame for it getting so long. That and it kind of gives a feeling of "where's Cloud during this?" Even though he's one of the three out there, he's not really shown doing anything directly, and it ends up feeling like the fic could easily be rewritten to be just Cid and Yuffie (with Yuffie having tried to summon one right after the other) without losing anything. The part that seems to show his characterization most is really him simply watching Cid's failed attempt with launching Aerith's staff and matter-of-factly getting things organized for him to have a spear.

Date: 2013-05-09 16:16 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
I might! The megaphone really is a fun idea (and yeah, it does seem like it should have happened somewhere). ...As is Cid kicking Cait Sith to make sure he's actually a robot that switches itself off, hahaha.

Ohh, yeah. Maybe they were just trying to get Shiva and Ifrit corporeal at the same time and the two immediately picked a fight--so the theory was about just the summons, with superheated ice being an accidental discovery.

To be honest I'd prefer Cloud joining the conversation in some way, as I think he might make the explaining a little less round-about--but I did have an idea for an easy fix at first, which I hesitated at suggesting in the previous comment because I'd rather see more Cloud than do the easy fix (I'm biased). But pretty much after "small fires burning in places" came up, once I realized Cloud didn't seem to be anywhere near the conversation, I started figuring he was taking care of the fires--depending on the size, either simply stamping them out or for bigger ones using a water or ice spell. (...Enemy skill "Aqualung"...)

But anyway, yes! It was amusing.

Date: 2013-05-10 17:08 (UTC)
raaj: [ff7] cloud attempts to make zack stay still. (you STAY there.)
From: [personal profile] raaj
Ah, so Cait Sith still has some video feed going when he's off? I was confused at first before realizing that makes more sense for security reasons (because er, yeah, would be bad to have Cait Sith "off" and have something drastic happen in the meantime).

But yes! I like this idea. And haha, I think Aqualung came to mind because it was one of the few Enemy Skills I actually did manage to collect on my last playthrough (I'm always terrible at that). It does stand out as the only water element spell, though as I reading this actually makes it super useful if you do have it, as then few enemies are made strong/immune to Water damage.

Date: 2013-05-10 18:58 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
...Okay the first paragraph made me laugh as one of the things I did for the 750 words site seriously was talking about Cait Sith's wake up sequence (I was pretty much taking the "flashworks" comm's prompt of "Comfort" and mashing up different characters with it for a freewrite):

Comfort for Reeve is a hot cup of coffee in the morning. And in the evening. And in the dead of night. He certainly has gotten himself addicted to the stuff over the long years of working for Shinra. But right now it is morning and so that is his comfort, this cup of steaming coffee with just a bit of cream and sugar in his mug as he sits down and starts his work day, several hours before any other executive will even think of coming in.

Well, that's the kind of day you earn yourself living a double life. He flips a switch at the workstation and sips--ah, just barely under burning, perfect--as the monitor in front of him flickers on in a sleepy way; the vision of a quiet inn across the ocean in Cosmo Canyon blinks in and out in a manner near perfectly-identical to how the world came into focus for Reeve just forty-five minutes ago, and Reeve knows Cait is making a show of stretching muscles it doesn't have, imitating life more closely than it needs to. It amuses people, they find it cute. Aerith in particular found it adorable when she'd woken early and caught him one day. And an amused person was a relaxed one, and relaxation meant a lowering of the guard.

Reeve needs as little suspicion as possible, especially after that bungled capture attempt in Gongaga.


So yeah actually I really like the idea of an elaborate wake-up sequence that's really unnecessary--but it's useful in ways people don't suspect at first.

Hahaha! I was focusing on the "Comfort" stuff for the past few days but now that that's done I think I'm going to get back to trying to organize "Sleeping Arrangements" (I have like 3000 words that need to be reduced to a more coherent 2000 and given an ending, and finish rewriting the Gongaga section...and actually write the Wutai part. lol.) Sometimes does cause a forgetfulness about tone but it's also handy for not burning out on one project.

Haha I was so proud of myself getting Beta from Zolom, even though I was massively overleveled at that point by being about halfway through the game so it wasn't that much of an accomplishment.

Date: 2013-05-13 04:11 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
Nah, to be honest I'm really not surprised you didn't find much to comment on--though I liked getting it out and written, I did feel like it was a bit "pat"/predictable in a way.

Huh. I always thought the party member with Enemy Skill had to survive, so I'm sort of surprised that worked for the Midgar Zolom too!

And--well, I'll eventually get back to actual progress in fic...lately has been a no-go. I'd blame it on Mother's Day + sibling's birthday but I don't think those are entirely it...

Date: 2013-05-13 20:49 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
Hahaha. True, since Tifa was mentioned first I can see her being the expected one, and I probably could have noted at the same time that Denzel was only worried about her because Cloud was out on delivery (probably something to add when I get around to crossposting).

...Welp, I've utterly forgotten my Final Fantasy VII game mechanics. GUESS I'LL HAVE TO REPLAY IT.

Actually, I think I've only ever killed one optional WEAPON (I know I haven't touched Ruby or Emerald). None of my playthroughs have ever been entirely completionist, though I can say with my last one I finally visited all areas of the game! (Hadn't been to the Ancient Forest.)

I think the Mother's Days are dated differently because they were founded differently? Father's Day here should be about a month away, iirc. ...It looks like the third Sunday of June is a date commonly shared by a LOT of the world, actually! Wikipedia has a table for grouping which countries celebrate it when. The grouping for the Mother's Day is big too, but different--well, UK being part of that difference. haha. It looks like the UK's version is based in the church, which explains why the dating is based on Lent, and is much older than the US's tradition (and our dating simply the second Sunday of May).

/sorry I went and investigated XD

Date: 2013-05-16 14:23 (UTC)
raaj: [ff7] cloud attempts to make zack stay still. (you STAY there.)
From: [personal profile] raaj
I tweaked it a bit anyway--though you might have noticed that XD

Just a very very small reason :p ...That's really interesting to think of a world where Emerald and Ruby really are still around. I doubt they still are, as they seemed like they should have been mentioned at some point: Ruby may be ignorable for the moment, if making the Corel Desert that much more awful, but Emerald roams anywhere in the ocean. Both submarine and boating excursions would be nerve-wracking (not that Emerald ever attacks a boat in-game, and its behavior might easily be that it never frequents shallower depths, but would you be willing to trust in that to isolate yourself on a boat, where there's no place to escape to?), forget undersea research, and here's yet another reason to hope Barret and Cid quickly figure out another energy source because deep-sea oil-drilling isn't happening. (...Though I did just make myself laugh and then shake my head at the thought of Barret and Cid convincing Cloud he needs to come out with them--yeah, bring the underwater materia--so they can fight emerald so they can start off-shore drilling and that would just be like... guys no. no. That is completely the wrong reasoning for everything.)

I think both Mother's Day and Father's Day, the ideas are so basic that they were going to come up multiple times, so it's a common holiday--but the traditions behind it are all different.

Date: 2013-05-17 17:25 (UTC)
raaj: [ff7] cloud & aerith on the gondola (Default)
From: [personal profile] raaj
Ah, good point! The remnant activity should have provoked something in Advent Children. Similarly I imagine the mass kidnappings at Junon in Dirge succeeded by so much slaughtering, if it ended up in a reaction from the Planet for Omega Weapon, should probably be stirring up the two other WEAPONs somehow...

Though it'd still kind of be worth a joke fic where the guys go to do this and then Aerith interrupts the fight and is pretty much "WOW I am not happy with you guys go sit in your drenched clothes on the beach and think about what you were doing /BOOTS". ...Guys thinking oh, crud, they ticked off Aerith.

IX sort of addresses power sourcing in the Mist, but yeah, there's not really been a focus on that since VII.

...My Father's Day presents have usually been food. XD

Date: 2013-05-20 22:56 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
Yeah, the way some of the novellas are set so soon after the end of the game, the WEAPONs were likely already gone one way or the other, but they could have been dealt with too.

Actually--I was just imagining Aerith would tell the WEAPON that everything was alright, the rude guys were going to think about they'd done but you knoooow, since the danger was over now, maybe it should go take a nap...

Really even if Holy itself isn't a WEAPON shutdown, the WEAPONs are probably attuned to the Planet so they can tell hey, cool, imminent demise is no longer a thing (geostigma likely being too subtle to be figured out as an immediate threat), or Aerith/other Cetra would be able to tell them. NAPTIME. ...Also I'm now picturing Ruby "burying" itself in the sand like a kid would cover themselves up at the beach. So. Serious thought, what is that. And yeah, I just like a bit of joke fic in general haha.

Yyyyeah, hopefully Gaia gets a clue about using solar/wind/water power in the meantime. ...I'm now wondering where exactly nuclear power falls in here, though I imagine that's still an OH HECK NO for the risk of catastrophic failures/we still don't have solutions & answers for the long-term storage of waste.

Date: 2013-05-22 22:40 (UTC)
raaj: (head in the clouds)
From: [personal profile] raaj
Moreso if Aeris is in control as I can see her keeping the Weapons shut down to give Cloud and co a chance to do things more surgically...

I'm a bit amused at the idea that had they NOT succeeded, it'd pretty much be time to loose the hounds/let WEAPON go after Sephiroth before he did any more with the negative Lifestream.

...Which actually could have been really awesome to watch. Though I'm assuming disastrous for ANYONE in the area, and possibly a large enough area to include Edge, ahaha...

Re: Team Materia v2

Date: 2013-05-27 14:58 (UTC)
raaj: (kittens)
From: [personal profile] raaj
It's amusing to note that Yuffie has essentially blamed everyone in the situation ("Blame Shiva", "Cloud's more at fault", "It would have worked perfectly if Ifrit hadn't")...except herself, of course! Oh Yuffie.

...Also I forgot to ask this before, but I've been wondering: is the "flare" cast part of an effect of Ifrit's kick, or did Cloud actually cast that separately (what I'd assumed first)? Was he hoping to evaporate the ice before it'd hit Cid or...? I remember it confused me a bit the first time because it does sound like a separate spell, in which case I'd assume the explosion was pretty much exact opposite of what Cloud wanted to happen (even if in retrospect, okay Cid's not hurt, so Cloud can appreciate that it was a cool effect) since the ice was going off course by the point he cast flare. I might just be confusing myself on things.

I really do like though Cloud sharing the hi-five with Yuffie; I imagine him looking "cool" (or at least casual despite his embarrassment) right up until she initiates it, and then never mind he is a total dork.

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