Nah, to be honest I'm really not surprised you didn't find much to comment on--though I liked getting it out and written, I did feel like it was a bit "pat"/predictable in a way.
Huh. I always thought the party member with Enemy Skill had to survive, so I'm sort of surprised that worked for the Midgar Zolom too!
And--well, I'll eventually get back to actual progress in fic...lately has been a no-go. I'd blame it on Mother's Day + sibling's birthday but I don't think those are entirely it...
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Date: 2013-05-13 04:11 (UTC)Huh. I always thought the party member with Enemy Skill had to survive, so I'm sort of surprised that worked for the Midgar Zolom too!
And--well, I'll eventually get back to actual progress in fic...lately has been a no-go. I'd blame it on Mother's Day + sibling's birthday but I don't think those are entirely it...