This... took longer to get back to then it was supposed to. But here is a newly revised chapter 1 (with some changes on the escape from Shinra resulting from discussion with ![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
raaj and an expanded ending... which I'm not entirely sure if I should keep) and a finished chapter 2.
( Chapter 1 )
( Chapter 2 )
raaj and an expanded ending... which I'm not entirely sure if I should keep) and a finished chapter 2. ( Chapter 1 )
( Chapter 2 )
