Finally gotten back to this, mended some odd lines, tightened some dialogue and descriptions and moved things around slightly. I've removed the list of photos for now as I'm tempted to make their descriptions a bit more detailed so they'll go back in later.

I've realised that I have Cloud finding Aeris' ribbon and previously never doing anything with it. Now he hands it to Tifa before it again vanishes from the story. Just really not sure if I should remove it or have it wind up somewhere else. Not sure I'd want it to go to Elmyra given it is blood-stained, but... Hmm. Any suggestions/comments gratefully received!

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