No worries - I know the feeling of thoughts scattering everywhere and nothing seeming to come out right... This comment is helpful though!
Heh - yeah I don't read sex fics that often either though its hard not to be curious about a favourite pairing - and some are so well written anyway... But that's good to know I seem to be steering clear of crassness; and yeah I really want to avoid crude phrasing/not being thoughtful of the participants (especially when it's these participants).
Haha - yeah if Aeris catches Cloud - well, no cool factor after that - and yeah, I think she'd back out with good grace (but no way can he even give the impression he's not oh so interested, and seemingly as much in need too...)
Ah! Glad that feels like it works having the attraction start after the reactor 1 bombing, and the second encounter cements the attraction. I like that idea of Aeris thinking about Cloud as a little fantasy on the way home (I think I know what you mean about sexually charged - she's not fantasising about sleeping with him, but her imagination is concentrating on him and how appealing she found him... and her body is responding to that) - and yeah dismissing those notions; no idea of his name or how to find him... And he's now fallen into her lap, she has more time with him/to find out about him, then her fantasies step up a gear and now she has a better opportunity for actual sex.
I think the latter option on the guilt would be a better idea - being attracted to him, but not romantically because of Zack...
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Heh - yeah I don't read sex fics that often either though its hard not to be curious about a favourite pairing - and some are so well written anyway... But that's good to know I seem to be steering clear of crassness; and yeah I really want to avoid crude phrasing/not being thoughtful of the participants (especially when it's these participants).
Haha - yeah if Aeris catches Cloud - well, no cool factor after that - and yeah, I think she'd back out with good grace (but no way can he even give the impression he's not oh so interested, and seemingly as much in need too...)
Ah! Glad that feels like it works having the attraction start after the reactor 1 bombing, and the second encounter cements the attraction. I like that idea of Aeris thinking about Cloud as a little fantasy on the way home (I think I know what you mean about sexually charged - she's not fantasising about sleeping with him, but her imagination is concentrating on him and how appealing she found him... and her body is responding to that) - and yeah dismissing those notions; no idea of his name or how to find him... And he's now fallen into her lap, she has more time with him/to find out about him, then her fantasies step up a gear and now she has a better opportunity for actual sex.
I think the latter option on the guilt would be a better idea - being attracted to him, but not romantically because of Zack...